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The Manuscripts of Dorothy Blewett: A Textual Comparison of The First Joanna
Researched and compiled by Saskia Stegman
(Status : Public)
Coordinated by Australian Drama Archive
  • Setting

  • Geographical Setting

    The geographical setting is Hobart in Tasmania, and Chateau Deveron in South Australia.

    Temporal Setting

    The 'present' is 'Summer; end 1945,' a few months after the war had ended in Europe.

  • Plot

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    Blewett continued to develop the plot in this final version. There is a significant revision of the dialogue making it tighter and sparer. For example, the dialogue in Act One p2 has been completely rewritten, and the entire exchange between Stephen and Mrs Collins about breakfast has been deleted. Instead, there is a very short and to the point exchange in which Mrs Collins chides Stephen for 'behaving like a naughty child' (Blewett 3). Blewett's interpretation of Europe is more complex and the conversations between Joanna and Halley reveal this. The characters of Mrs Mattie van Druyten, Colonel Swinnerton and Mrs Swinnerton have been written out of the story as the ending has evolved. Instead, Joanna is deeply affected by the first Joanna's story and decided to stay. We know Blewett had continued to work on the script because it is mentioned in a letter (pictured left) from Rex Rienits regarding the ABC's purchase of the television rights.

  • List of characters

  • Cast

    The second Stephen Deveron

    Mrs Collins who 'obliges' at Chateau Deveron

    The second Joanna Deveron, Stephen's wife

    Halley van Druyten

    Jocelyn Cumin, Stephen's second cousin

    Miss Editha Deveron and Miss Viola Deveron, Stephen's twin great-aunts aged 92

    Jackson the chauffeur

  • Interpolated Scenes

    1837

    The first Stephen Deveron, aged 22

    Sir Bertram Taverner, Governor of a Women's Jail

    Lady Caroline Taverner, his wife

    Miss Beatrice Taverner, his sister

    Captain Jules Smith, aged 29

    Joanna Millay, the first Joanna, aged 17


    1862

    Joanna, aged 42

    The Deverons' Children:

    Augusta, aged 20

    Philip, aged 14

    Editha and Viola, aged 10

    Stephen Deveron, aged 47

    Major Jules Smith, aged 54


    1871

    Editha and Viola, aged 18

    Joanna, aged 51


    1885

    Stephen, aged 69

    Joanna, aged 64

  • Manuscript Notes

  • The manuscript is 104 pages in length, 205mm wide and 250 mm long. It has a buff cardboard cover that is very worn. The paper is buff typing paper. It has no markups or edits apart from a few faint pencil marks on page two.

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